So, tonight during my mega-long shift at work, I decided to sit down and jot down another bit for my fanfiction. For anyone who read the first bit, this one obviously follows that chronologically, but I'm not sure if there won't be something in between in the finished product. I don't know if I want to have a sort of transition scene (which is what I'm leaning toward at the moment) or keep it at a jumpcut. Dk.
To be perfectly honest I'm just writing these as they come to me, so eventually I'll be writing scenes all out of order.
But I honestly think I'm going to like writing Hyo's story the most.
This scene features a crapton of cameos. I'm not sure when I decided the brothel would be made up of this group of girls but oh well. It works.
As usual, I'm using you guys as a sounding board. Tell me what sucks, what doesn't. If you think I should scrap this altogether. Give ideas on future things you'd like to see happen. Etc etc. Consider yourselves beta readers.( Meet Kim HyoyeonCollapse )
Much more dialogue this time around. I'm not sure quiet why it's so different from the last time. Meh. I still like it.